Good!

I can feel the emotions written in this, it reminds of me of myself.

Well keep writing!

Ending is very powerful, you expressed emotions superbly and concept of this piece is great. It has also excellent flow and it is very unique. You are really talented, well done, fantastic poem, it is simple but still incredible.

Whoa. What an awesome experience.

Great poem again!
i loved how you went full circle repeting yourself at the end gave so much more flow etc

was a great read and an amazing piece of poetry!

Keep it up!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

I love the ending to this. I feel like I lose myself sometimes and I'm all alone. I like how you describe the street that your walking on. You don't do it in a creepy "I'm alone in the dark" kind of way, but more in an adoring kind of way, like your wandering around looking for someone. The flow was constant and very easy to follow. I've since how much you have grown as a writer and that's great. But this was wonderful none the less. Keep it up sweetheart :) Nik