Comments : Reflections

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very original and nicely written, with good imagery. I like the descriptions and the rhyming scheme in whole piece, and the flow is excellent.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -The carefree little girl I saw,
    When I was four or five,
    Has now become a woman,
    Fighting everyday to survive.-

    Keep up!
    5/5 from me