Very emotional and deep. I like it, rhythm of this poem is beautiful and I enjoyed in it. Topic is also very interesting and some lines are so effective. It deserves 5/5

Hmmm, that is certainly different.

Your in my favourites. 5.5 (again)
your imagery is amazing and your descriptions are unique, complex and mature.
congratulations and i thank you for adding to the stream of talent in p and q

Quite a different piece. I liked it alot though I must say.. Really deep and held such strong emotions. The imagery portrayed was great and your word choice I must say really powerful. An interesting poem which didn't lose its flow at all throughout the entire thing. Well done keep writing. ~Mel

What amazing imagery you've created with this piece... I'm actually at a loss for words now. lol
It's beautiful
5/5
*Gem*