I Wonder Why I Was Born

by Kristina   Sep 18, 2007


I'm so sad, I wish I had you,
I need someone to talk to.

I'm so alone now and then,
I always feel like I have no friends.

Sometimes I wonder why I was born
Into a world where I don't belong.

Why does everyone hate me?
What did I do to deserve this?

I need someone in my life,
Someone here for me when I'm down.

A good friend by my side,
One who will stay when I cry.

I have secrets that need to be told,
But who can I tell when I have no one?

Copyright © September 15, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    For this one, This piece is great, the first thing that I notice is the shortness and simple words that you used. Honestly I can say that is great! But I also notice is I think there is something on this. Maybe because I want to see more edgy words!

    Keep on it!

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Such a simple dilect here, it almost seems to have a lesser maturity level. However, despite the rhyme scheme being mediocre, the writing level is higher with a higher topic, so it evens out a bit.

    {5/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I enjoyed this piece, and many can relate to those feelings. It seems that sometimes you rhyme, and sometimes you don't, so my only suggestion is to be consistent. Other than that...good job. Your last two lines were my fav!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    I can deff relate to this one.. very nicely written.. keep it up =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I felt as though the ending was abrupt and that it didn't flow. perhaps i was just reading it wrong..lol
    But i think you have some very good ideas flowering in your literature. Keep writing kiddo.

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