I really like this poem 5/5

5/5 I can relate to this so can many others! This poem gives out a lot of feeling!

5/5 im relating to this SOOOOO much right now. the emotions and the words were wonderful. the poem all together was beautiful! keep it up!

That was awsome,I loved it, it reminded me of me somedays.... 5/5

Good poem.. but don't feel that way. if anything write in a journal about how you feel. and if that doesn't help then talk to a counslor (im not saying anything is wrong with you) you could also take a leap and just try talking to someone. maybe in time you'll have a friend made and that you can trust.

I love this poem.
While I was reading it I felt like you were writing about me.
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I really like this poem, its pretty much how i think. Very nice flow, one of my fav's!

I felt as though the ending was abrupt and that it didn't flow. perhaps i was just reading it wrong..lol
But i think you have some very good ideas flowering in your literature. Keep writing kiddo.

I can deff relate to this one.. very nicely written.. keep it up =]

I enjoyed this piece, and many can relate to those feelings. It seems that sometimes you rhyme, and sometimes you don't, so my only suggestion is to be consistent. Other than that...good job. Your last two lines were my fav!
Charisma*

Such a simple dilect here, it almost seems to have a lesser maturity level. However, despite the rhyme scheme being mediocre, the writing level is higher with a higher topic, so it evens out a bit.

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[PygmyPuff]

Excellent!

For this one, This piece is great, the first thing that I notice is the shortness and simple words that you used. Honestly I can say that is great! But I also notice is I think there is something on this. Maybe because I want to see more edgy words!

Keep on it!