You've really put your heart on your sleeve with this poem. I really liked it - shows all your emotions beautifully! I hope it all works out for you Crystal.

Nice poem i enjoyed it

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Awwz im srry thats so sad!! great poem tho!!

This was a really good poem and u cud really understand the emotions! gr8 job! tnx 4 tha comment!

Good poem keprt me reading dont stop writing

Oh dats really cut3 n beautiful i love it gurl

This is a really good piece. It really shows a lot of passion in it i enjoyed it very much. hope it all works out for ya. thx for the comment. 5/5 from me! =)

This is really really cute. I love the flow of it. I think this poem could turn into a really great song too. Great job! 5/5 :)

~Kat~

Omg...when i read this poem i start crying,cause it is the way i feel right now...this poem is beautiful,,good great awesome wonderful job you did..i love this poem like so bad

Wow...i know how u feel about missing ur baby...my babies in AZ...has been there since oct and will be back a few days before x-mas....great poem i loved it!!

AWW TTHAT MAKES ME SAD... I MISS MY BABY TOO!!! =[ WOW U REALLY CREATED GOOD IMAGERY THERE GREAT POEM KEEP IT UP =]

Hey thanks for the comment (: I should probably start writing poems but it's not really my thing. But I like this poem, I miss my babyy too haha. Keep it up!