by LostLikeTearsInRain Sep 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My head begins to spin |
by *Charisma*
Awww....very very sweet piece. I really liked it the whole way through. It's just the right length and such a good piece. Editing just a word here or there would improve the flow and make this near perfect. Hope that helps! |
Aww |
by Mary
Out of all the poems i have read in my life, this poem has the best flow. Good job!! keep up the good work |