Out of all the poems i have read in my life, this poem has the best flow. Good job!! keep up the good work

~mary~

Aww
i like it..i feel the emotion in it
great, excellent poem, i absolutely loved it!

Awww....very very sweet piece. I really liked it the whole way through. It's just the right length and such a good piece. Editing just a word here or there would improve the flow and make this near perfect. Hope that helps!
Charisma*