by Alexandra Jade Brewer Sep 19, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
family
You broke me down |
by Sweet lig
Yeah that was so true...! the flow of this poems is pretty good and the words seems very strong and very dedicated. i beleive in angels though keep it up 5/5 |
by TracyM
I liked this one, the words flowed perfectley, that and the word choice and structure made the poem all the more enjoyable to read, really sweet, keep writing. |
"Your my necessity |
by turtle
That was lovely... :) |