Hey,
I think you have a great talent in describing something with so little words. I enjoy reading your work. the flow is good (again).
well I have nothing more to say except '' keep up the good work'' 5/5
kisses stephanie

Ending is fantastic and very effective. I enjoyed in this one, it is original and very positive. My favorite stanza is third, you created great atmosphere in this piece, and it is filed with emotions. It deserves 5/5

Very, very nice.