by Twisted Heart Sep 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Befall thy love my sweet embrace |
by debbylyn
So beautifully constructed....love the style, rhyme and word usage.....absolutely beautiful love poem! |
I imagined those words while standing beside a love in the middle of a full moon light. Tis so romantic. |
by Deana
I really envy you being able to write in this style,you are so good at it,I think it is the most romantic of all among the different styles.This is really great. |
by JanaeNae
That was a really good poem...you have a way with words! :] |
Wow, this is wonderful. Usually I'm kind of like, "Meh" when it comes to old English terms. I'm a modern lass. =P But this was truly amazing. The flow was perfect, the wording was perfect. |