Love this! so simple! so straight forward! so deep! so relateable. so expressional, is that a word?

This is great!!! short and sweet with deep intake. i love it. carries a lot of meaning in only a few lines. plus i can relate and i love it when i can relate to other peoples poetry. great job!

So little words with so deep meaning. Really sweet. Amazing poem, takes a lot talent to do that :)
Keep it up! 5/5

Really deep!
well i'll tell u what i thought it meant, u can tell mi if i was rite, k?
I felt dat u were tryin 2 say dat we tend 2 focus on small things and make it out 2 b biggr than what it really is then when we have a moment of realization and come to understand what really is important in life.
5/5! loved it!

Very good you r sooooooo perceptive.I give u 5/5 on a random poem!! and quote

Very good you r sooooooo perceptive.I give u 5/5 on a random poem!! and quote

Short. simple.
but full of meaning.
5/5. :]]

I read it once, read it twice and when I read it the third time, I realized how much it reminds me of my own situation. Even if his poem had been not like my life at all, it would still be amazing. Thank you for sharing

That was very simple and down to the point, it was great. 5/5!

Great poem. I really like it.

5/5

This is a very good picture.. i love it.. its to deep and to the point... 5/5

This is a very good poem... sorry i put picture... i love it btw its so deep and to the point.... 5/5

I liked this piece. So simple yet so emotional and deep, 5/5. Em x