I like this poem alot. you keep throwing the reader around, you want this person back, but then keep reading and you dont. then you do, then you dont. and in the end, you dont go back to them. plus the way its written is well worded.

Nice poem i enjoyed it

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This poem was long, but did not lose interest at all throughout it. Not once did I get bored and hope for it to end. I actually wished it could keep going. You and Kerry have been busy creating such beautiful pieces together, you both write amazingly and have great talent i'm glad you have used your talent together to create this piece. Deep emotion portrayed which was written in depth. I truely loved this. Well done keep up the great work. ~Mel 5/5