by Jenni Marie
Okay. This is one of the best I have ever read for you. |
Wow, so beautifully written. I've missed reading your poetry which is always so inspiring. Your poems always flow so well, and its so easy to fall into the words and feel the moment. |
I love the way you wrote this! A unique interpretation, and very sincere, fluid, and emotive. Great from start to finish. |
I love this, the imagery in this is remarkable and I love the overall story that you wrote in this piece, very inspirational, makes a reader think lol. Good job. |
by *Charisma*
Wow! I really didn't think you could take a nature poem and make it so deep and inspiring, but you did! It's beautiful. You never cease to amaze me with your pieces, and this one is just so good...really stepped it up a notch. Your fourth line had great imagery! |
Such a beautiful write, its amazing. I loved every bit of it, a wonderfully written piece. |
by Krzysztof J
:) Gem you dont have any bad poems do you? lol im waiting for something i can crytisize yet you havent provided anything lol another great poem :)) 5/5 |
by Allison
I loved your poem. It was decriptive and it flowed well. Keep the great ones coming. ^_^ 5/5 |
Wow wow wow! You're going on my favorites from that poem alone. AMAZING darling. |
I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work |
by Kelly
Woah, amazing, just great, cant, have no more words left lol. |
by Mommy And Me
(sorry it has taken me a very long time to get you your three comments for winning a conest a few months ago but here i am now) |
by Midnight Sun
This comment is for entering my very drawn out contest (due to stress, busy life, emergency room, everyday crap, lol) But thank you VERY much for your entry. |
I don`t remember if I already commented on this, I looked and didn`t see it, but apparently..I already voted lmao..anyways, I absolutely love this, the imagery is very strong and the flow is perfect. I was able to visualize everything that was being said without losing focus. Loved it. |
by Nebula
Great Gem, wonderfull imagery. Keeps you reading till the end. I enjoyed it... |
by chavii
This thorned beauty teaches a lesson, take heed |
by 1Mistake
This ... is my favorite or yours!! ^-^ |
by pookiengurgi
This was a wonderful piece..you've got talent...this is definitely a mastery of one of many meanings to life.Wonderful! |
by browneyezz
Wow that was beautiful |
by MyEscape
I think this is a beautiful poem for a rose and all it represents. I enjoyed those last two stanzas best. The rhyme was well done and didn't seem forced. I think this was very well done! |