I really liked this poem, Sky! It was about darkness and lust and I don't see a lot of poems like this one. You have a way with words and pulled this one off well. Great job!! 5/5 <3 <3

~Rikku~

Wow, really great write. The title really got my attention some how lol. The description was well done, I normally like poems with a bit of rhyming in it though this one was just as great ^^ I also agree with Rikku the poem was different to other poems, I've never read a poem that as pain and lust collided together ^^ Good Job!! xx Love Roxeh