Awwww.. this poem was so sad. My eyes got watery as I read it! I can really connect to it and it's just so sad to have to go through all of that and not wanting to breathe anymore. Keep up the awesome job Sky! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~

Hey, nice poem by the way.
There was really just 1 thing that kind of ruined it for me. One was the word "goo". Sorry, the word just makes me laugh, so it killed the mood of the poem. I liked it though. :]