Awww, thats really good, it is good you can also wirte it in two languages. well done xx

Well said

K, I've loved all your poems but I think that was is my favorite and it's just...one of those that touched my heart ~_~ That was a fantastic writing job ^_^ A perfect 5 ~_~ The last four lines are my favorite though and I hope you know just how talented you are =)
Rhea

Hay mucha verdad en este poema
es muy lindo!
5/5!

I love ur poem! vewry original ideas! (although i can speak much spanish) but anyways awesome poem, good cominations! 5/5 keep up the great work

Nice...

muy bein! mucho gusto! es un placer! lol, i only know a little "phrase spanish"

Wow i really felt the emotion in this....keep it up please!!!

Éste es un buen poema. Buen trabajo. Me encantó

Este es un buen poema. Buen trabajo. me encanta 5/5

Me encantoooo! Y se como se siente todo eso. Que bueno que hay alguien que escriba poemas en espanol, ya no se ven poemas asi casi. Nunca dejes de escribir! 5/5

` Liz =]

Beautiful poem ! Loved it with whole my heart...especially in spanish , 5/5
.......*Melody*.....

Haha..ur gight its better in spanish ;)

i loved it tho.
i could feel ur remorse against him..

nosotras mujeres necesitamos q ser fuertes ;)

I loved it!!!
5/5
Aly

I enjoyed this poem alott it reminded me of why i left the guy i did and that i am strong and could keep on going although i wasnt pregnant at the time i still felt tied up right now i with a great guy and i wouldnt be with him if i haden't broken up with the guy i did right at this moment i am 5 months and three weeks pregnan and i am really happy

I enjoyed this poem alott it reminded me of why i left the guy i did and that i am strong and could keep on going although i wasnt pregnant at the time i still felt tied up right now i with a great guy and i wouldnt be with him if i haden't broken up with the guy i did right at this moment i am 5 months and three weeks pregnant and i am really happy

Wow your peoms leave me speechless...5/5