Amazing poem...very well written...great job ~*~CINDY~*~

Breath taking--this made me speachless--i had to take a moment! This is heart felt! Nicely written

Wow! This is an amazing poem, probably one of the best and enjoyable poems I have ever read. You have alot of talent, keep it up, 5/5

Thats a really nice poem i like it

Great work

Amazing...so powerful...5/5

Rob,

It's such a sad feeling to see your mother cry. This piece is full of emotion and it touched me especially as right now my mum is going through some stuff but I know she holds in the tears when with me because she hates crying in front of me.
A very good write where again the rhyming is fluent throughout which keeps it smooth.
Em