by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Sep 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The candle wax is melting around our swollen eyes. I've touched worse, but the smell's starting to get to me. As for what I heard, what if I told you I'd already forgotten? Or maybe, misplaced some information? |
by Robert
Your dark side illuminates your work very well. I have read all you requested me to read and I am pleased with the descriptions and the handling of your words. I enjoyed them all hope you find the same afection for my work Plot121 |
Love the title, though it was a bit confusing after reading the poem. |
I love the structure of this, it reaches out to the reader so well, and the language you use is just amazing, the way you tell the story through asking questions. This is a really commanding piece, i really enjoyed it. |
by Veamm
Excellent! |