Excellent!

I can much emotions, the ideas were tranform into words, and words into message..has deep and word usafe is great..some lines doesn't fit much..but the entire piece is nicely done!

keep it uP!

I love the structure of this, it reaches out to the reader so well, and the language you use is just amazing, the way you tell the story through asking questions. This is a really commanding piece, i really enjoyed it.
Great Job
DnB

Love the title, though it was a bit confusing after reading the poem.

This isn't going to sound like a compliment, but it is: I've never read such a blunt poem. Every word, every emotion is spelled right out for the reader, and I love that.

I'm still not sure I completely understand the poem one-hundred percent, but I liked what I did understand. very nice.

Your dark side illuminates your work very well. I have read all you requested me to read and I am pleased with the descriptions and the handling of your words. I enjoyed them all hope you find the same afection for my work Plot121