I think its really good, i love the emotion in it
absolutley great

I LOVE this song...I mean it was great...
You know that I still love you,
But now I have to go my way.
And though Ill always miss you
The harder thing would be to stay.
I wish I could have seen it,
But love for you has made me blind.
And now my heart is empty, so
Its best to get you off my mind.

That stanza of lyrics was amazing...really really hit home. It's going into my list of favorite poems!
Brilliant...hope ya'll have fun recording it!
Charisma*