Wonderful write, the rhyme and structure was great as well as the flow.

The second to last stanza, second line, I think you mean "of" not "f"

Good work, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Another lovely one dear, you have done a wonderful job again... it seems like you never run out of great words and emotions to tease my heart with,lol

keep it up

Very good job, I hope you don`t really have this low of an opinion of yourself. very sincere.

I think this is a very well written poem. The rhyme structure and flow was ace, and it oozed emotion. This piece gives me a very sad stinging emotion. Nicely penned. Keep it up!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Wow, this is great. I love it Kitty. Keep up the awesomeness.

Wow good job..keep it up, you write very good, you should read my two poems i have written so far, yours are better though.5/5