Aww thats it :( come on now, you have to say what happens next ;) lol they were all great,..
~JESS

U shouldve put "to be continued" at the end.it was a good poem.

Thats really good!

you should make a sequal.
lol
return the love :)

*lynnette*

5/5 very very nice... nicely done.. excellent way to describe it... sounds like you had a good time... you should check out a few of my erotic poems... please comment and rate back.. DONT STOP WRITEING!
-Marina

I agree wit jess, u have to write more! plz!

Oh my god i can not stop reading your stuff.. god this makes me so hott..... mmm please!! for my sake, write more.... or personal message me and tell me or make up a session.... i'll write back.... mmmmm mmm
5/5-Marina