by ghosts in bloom Sep 19, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
The air was flawed with soul-dirtied junction |
by Marc Ortiz
Oh I love the last line! =D I really enjoyed reading all 3 of your poems =) I hope to read more piece from you. |
by geeeeee
I dont see how anybody could not be happy with this poem, I dont see how you could not be happy with this poem lol. It was excellently written, the idea behind it, the vocab you used. Overall if I had to rate this poem I would give it a wow :) |
by Dark Demise
Very nice, I like you're style of writeing it's so awesome, |
by Edward D Zurovec
An absolutely wonderful read, your word choices are amazing and to pen these emotions is most inspiring. I enjoyed this dearly, especially the fourth and fifth stanzas. |
I must say this is excellentlly written, the flow and the structure was good and I loved the way you worded this poem. You have a lot of talent, and I hope to read more of your work soon. |