I must say this is excellentlly written, the flow and the structure was good and I loved the way you worded this poem. You have a lot of talent, and I hope to read more of your work soon.

Peace, Joe

An absolutely wonderful read, your word choices are amazing and to pen these emotions is most inspiring. I enjoyed this dearly, especially the fourth and fifth stanzas.
Peace and Blessings

Very nice, I like you're style of writeing it's so awesome,
Keep up the good work,

5/5

I dont see how anybody could not be happy with this poem, I dont see how you could not be happy with this poem lol. It was excellently written, the idea behind it, the vocab you used. Overall if I had to rate this poem I would give it a wow :)

Take Care.

Oh I love the last line! =D I really enjoyed reading all 3 of your poems =) I hope to read more piece from you.

I really love your choice of words, I can see that you really have the potential to improve more. Keep up the good work!