Comments : Cards

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is a pretty sweet poem :]

    i like your word usage and the structure and flow were good... but the rhythm was hecka jumpy... thats the only negative thing i have to say...
    good job! 4.5

    ~Sandra

  • 17 years ago

    by XxLovelyBlackRosesxX

    Wow such powerful words.
    i wish i could use powerful words like this.