Hearts Call

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Sep 20, 2007


You tore down my walls
To get to me
You watched the rubble fall

Crystal Gaze,
You stare into my eyes
Maybe your a phase

Your to much to comprehend
My head is shattered, broken
But maybe its on the mend

So bring down my walls
As fast as you can
"Come to me" my heart calls

Then help me build back the walls
Because this is what we wanted
Someone with us inside

Inside the walls
To hug us and kiss us
Someone to respond
To our hearts call

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Jade, this wasn't your best. But it was admirable.
    It felt forced, like there was no meaning behind it. But maybe thats how you wanted it portrayed, I dunno.
    Its still good:D and it has my pen name on it;)

    Rofl!
    4/5 --Elly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    Very nice work. This is a lovely poem. 5/5