by Veamm Sep 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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by Kayla Kay
This is a really great poem. |
by 4 track demo
I'm not gonna critique on the grammar of your poem, i could care less, the message of what it meant to me, is what is so much more important, when i read something this moving and powerful amd can look past little grammatical blah blah blahs, awesome job...! |
The grammar in this threw me off, but I felt emotions seeping out of it. A dramatic and well written piece, with decent flow. Lovely work. |
I love this poems, its great. i gave it 5. keep writing |
by Lisa
I really liked this one. I gave it a 5. |