by Tahniya Sep 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Walking the streets all alone |
by chind
Ohh wow. |
by *Charisma*
Yep, that's just about perfect! It was well put. I wish the ending was a little more conclusive...I think the anger could have built up more, but what you did write spoke straight to my heart and feelings. It was really, really good. I enjoyed the last two stanzas the best. You just totally summed up the pain and hurt felt. Amazing! |
by Baby Rainbow
Very powerful words, keep it up xx |