Very powerful words, keep it up xx

Yep, that's just about perfect! It was well put. I wish the ending was a little more conclusive...I think the anger could have built up more, but what you did write spoke straight to my heart and feelings. It was really, really good. I enjoyed the last two stanzas the best. You just totally summed up the pain and hurt felt. Amazing!
Charisma*

Ohh wow.
this poem is so powerful and strong.
so much emotion and all.
its amaxing !
its so sad.. i can almost feel the pain in it.
whata great poem !
i love it !
5/5

xo.louiiii