Wow... that was amazing and a complete turn of events. The flow and the rhyming was amazing. Keep up the amazing work. And dont be so hard on yourself:)

Thanks for the comment on mine:)

Nice twist at the end. This poem deserves a second read. Nice rhyming and especially flow..good writing.

I'm so speechless. This is such a great poem with such a surprising ending. Beautiful. So simple yet so twisted and complex. ^_^ Good job and keep up the great work! Thanks for commenting! :D

I love this poem , its amazing..twist at the end though .Keep up the great work
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I liked this poem, i thought you were talking about someone else, the ending really surprised me
thanks for the comment.
kat
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Good job. It was an amazing poem..Didnt expect the ending which could be one of the reasons it was so good.

Humm, I simply loved it, it was a very well written poem and it was such a good ending, nice work 5/5

You surprise us all...the ending is great
you have an amazing writing style that is sophisticated, yet easily read and understood and probably felt by so many of us....
great poem

I love it, the flow and rhymes where great. Your word choice was good as well as structure. Although many poems are in Stanzas, I think this one does nicely without them. Great work, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Yeah...you're ending's just like to smack the reader on the face. It's like you build us up the whole way through...reaching the climax, and then out of nowhere you PUNCH us with that last line. It's like the WOW factor to your whole poem. Good job! I look forward to reading and commenting more of your poetry later. Just be expecting lots of comments from me. lol
Charisma*

Okay. Now I frikken LOVE that ending.
It was beautifully written, intense and a real twist.
Flow was good throughout the entire piece, but I noticed you used a lot of fillers (I, and, you etc) Try eliminating some of them and it often makes the flow even better.

Well i wasn't expecting that ending, i was reading it about half way and i was thinking in my head that you must really hate this person and then when i read the last line when you said that you hated no one but you, i couldn't believe it, i really thought you were talking about someone else, but it was good, you were very descriptive and you expressed the emotional hate very nicely. 5/5

you have got such a talent, i wish i was as good as you but i don't think i'm even close.

nikki

Wow that was amazing!! Fantastic Twist at the end!! I hope you don't think that of yourself.... if your anything like your writing you sound like an amazing guy! Don't beat yourself up, you don't deserve it!!!

I've felt this way more times then once. I can’t even begin to describe how this poem is a mirror image of myself. You write wonderful…keep up the good work 5/5

WOW! the ending just wow, suprised me...this is such a wonderful, beautiful piece! keep this up, 5/5 AWESOME!!!! wow....

MickeysBabyGurl

I loved this piece soo much! The last sentence really caught me off gaurd! I love the description used and how its extremely easy to compare with other people

This one made me grin alot :)

5/5

Wow.. this poem is really really good. certainly hit home! Keep it up :) x

That is strong! Wow, it made me shake! that is how i feel about myself, of course i dont do all of that but i got a mile long list! At first i thought you were hating your ex or bf for a second till i got all the way through! Wow-Really good!

Amaziing poem ur really a good writer.

WOW!!!

That was amazing!!! I am truly blown away by this poem. It is by far my fave by you ! The ending came to me at a totaly suprise and just left me saying woooow. I loved the repitition and the short sentences, it gave it a great pace. Well done *5/5* I truly enjoyed this one !