Wow this was really great, keep it up,
i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
Polaroid
p.s GREAT JOB

You want to know why I loved this poem? It's because of the questions. I love it when people ask questions in their poems. The flow and everything was good.

Great job!

Cayce xx

I like the 2 line stanza structure - it's good to read something different.

Anyway I think that you wrote this from your heart, good job. I think you should make this poem a little longer. anyway that's just a suggestion

it's still a great poem.