I love this but I just feel as though it is not as strong as many of your other poems are. It seems like you sat down to write and you never had an overall idea of what you wanted to write about, which is fine, but in this poem, the story and the rhymes seem just a little forced into where they are. I love this, don`t get me wrong, but the story just seems a little awkward to me is all.. But pooh on you because that`s the quote that I wanted to write for that contest LOL. <33

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Wow....this poem really got to me...i loved it. you wrote it so beautifully and the emotions in this poem are so powerful and really all i can say is wow....beautiful poem...5/5

Nice job! I felt the flow was a bit off in parts, but overall a really good piece full of emotion.

Walks out the door as the heartbreak, she fights it.

Nice line....I thought that was a really cool way to rhyme with the word 'quiet' but it didn't sound forced. I really am liking your work!
Charisma*