Wow this poem is really sad, but i can totally relate to it and i think a lot of other people can as well. it had a very nice flow to it. you did a wonderful job. i'm sorry this happened to you. 5/5

~Kristina

So this is felling of disgraced
I think you mean feeling of disgrace

Also I noticed that you start out using periods but then you stop which looked awkward.

My is now I'm falling apart doesn't really make sense. I think you may mean I am now falling apart.

Other than that the poem was great. I really loved the last two stanzas. :) 5.

Wow it was a powerful poem and i like how you end it up... you scared me(guys should watch out because they don't know what a woman can do) hehehe just kidding.. well back to the poem, it portrayed a lot of vivid emotions, simple yet very powerful indeed.. flawless poem. keep it up

Strongly, and uniquely penned! The flow twitched a little bit for me in places, but overall was pretty good. You sussed it out very well.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I do not know how anyone could
down vote this poem, i loved it.
the flow was a little off, but apart
from that it was amazing, well
done. 5/5 def from me

nikki

Good poem. Wonderfully written and you expressed yourself beautifully. Good word choice as well as a flawless flow. I also loved the foreshadowing of karma at the end. That's effective.
5/5

Keep it up && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

The emotion portrayed within this piece was quite deep to tell you the truth. I'm sure many people can relate to this. You expressed yourself deeply into each line and wrote straight from the heart which I could tell you did so from the feelings I felt flowing nicely from each word. The anger was raging and showed that love also comes with not only sadness but anger. Overall a great read. Well done. ~Mel

A deep poem filled with emotions of anger and frustration. I am really feeling your rage in this poem. The rhyming and choosing of words fit perfectly. Well done 5/5

Oh I love the ending! Just beautiful.

This was so sad to read and yet so wonderfully written, it was like -I- was feeling all of the emotion and pain you described in here.

As I was reading I was thinking how many people will be able to relate? I bet it's a hell of a lot who can.

Flow was perfect throughout and I found the whole piece to be incredibly moving and written with such beauty and grace.

Hell yeah! you'll show him! haha I absolutely loved this! I mean, not the part about him leaving you, but the revenge part.
"Hell hath no fury like a womans scorn"

GREAT.
5/5

Truly emotional and wonderful great flow to your words i'm sure everyone can relate to what your saying in this poem