This is a really good poem. i like it a lot.
i hope you win the contest.
5/5

This is an a m a z i n g poem.
great job.

and thanks for the comment.
i appreciate it. : )

stacyy.

For the last line in the first stanza it should really be So they can forget about what happenED. I liked it. :) Only one of the stanzas rhymed but this could be a non-rhyming poem that just so happens to have a rhyme so that's what I'm going to go with. I really enjoyed the logic in the third stanza. People do USUALLY regret those aweful marks they leave behind on their body after they do them. It's like wearing your heart on your sleeve or being an open book. It's like acne. You can't get rid of it you can only try to cover it up or let it go over time so it's on display for all to see. That was my favorite part and I'm sure the favorite part of many others to come. 5.

Hmm...
This poem is kinda hard for me to read... but this was marvelous. The flow was flawless, the wording was good, && the emotions were strong. 5.5 Wonderful job!

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

I love it. Most people write about how good it feels but that's a lie. That is the truth about cutting yourself. 5/5

I really like this poem.
&& everything written here is so true.
although not my best moments.
ive cut before. "/
i guess youre right about the scars.
but. urges. you know.
but whether people cut to forget or not.
i dont think theyll ever forget anything
that was worth cutting over. "/

5/5.

Good point. I have one like this too called Cutting Your Life. It's a touchy subject with so many, but the facts are facts....I enjoyed your perspective. Nice job!
Charisma*

I really liked reading ur view on cutting
its a really good poem
5/5

Wow wow wow wow.

Hey missy, this poem is really good and i completly feel the same way and share the same views!xo

This poem is kind of offensive but I know you don't mean to be. I'm glad you wrote this poem though. It is very true. Cutting helps for a little while, but the pain just comes back. I learnt that the hard way but it gets addicting and it's so hard to stop.

Anyway, this poem was wonderfully written and opened the eyes of many readers. The flow is flawless also.
5/5

Keep it up && Take Care

Very true poem and written for a very good audience with valuable and imprtant advice. I loved the word choice and he rhyming is perfect.

Cutting doesn't really help you,
Sometimes it can cause more pain,
You think you will get better,
But you're just left with shame.

These lines are superb and standing out :)

Tc 5.5
Fsams

I really, really like the point of this poem, i never thought about it that way. everytime you look at your wrists, you would remember why you did it.
5/5<3

Love your poems, so i was wondering if you could give me some feedback on some of mine, it would be greatly appreciated

how do you get so many votes?

YOU'RE GREAT

Hello hon.. i saw myself behind you by reading this poem. you can really define hurt! and thats great well writen and nice work

People cut themselves because they wanna feel somthing not just a lousy shell that they have for all of enternity