Comments : Better day

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Another bittersweet outpouring. I liked the use of third person viewpoint enabling the reader to imagine the scene as though looking through a window.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessicca Wiemken

    That was a great poem keep up the great work =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Devon

    Thats what i call talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    A really sad poem with lots of emotion, i like it, you where very descriptive.