Darkness

by Layla   Sep 20, 2007


Darkness in my mind
A black cloud that no one can find
Strangers walking around
There voices are so loud
Darkness in my mind
Darkness that no one will find

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Pretty good. Short and to the point. Sometimes thats all that is needed. The flow was good and the emotion felt. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow short, but really really deep. it def. has a lot of emotion in it. wonderful job you did writing it. 5/5

    ~Kristina

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