I used to...

by Layla   Sep 20, 2007


I used to love
I used to care
I used to do
anything not to end up in despair
But then I died
like a light blown out in the dark
It used to be bright, used to dance.
But a cold wind came at it was no longer there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    it flowed right but some lines were not that good..
    but its a great piece

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by JayJ

    This is a pretty sad poem, if only i knew what took that greatness away from you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww sad poem, but i can definitely relate to this one and i'm sure a lot of other people can as well. it's really good. 5/5

    ~Kristina

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