Stuck In Your Eyes

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Sep 20, 2007


Staring into your deep brown eyes
You've lost me all to fast
I start to watch our story unfold
You and I, the only cast

Moving quickly through the darkness
Your soft comforting hands out reached
To save and bring me to life
My voice no longer screeched

Taking your hand, you lead me down
Towards the sea we head
And you manage to take my breath away
With every perfect stunning word you said

The setting sun shined in you
Your soul lit up in away I'd never seen
Your love for me glowed with intensity
The calming world around was so serene

The moon rose slowly over the horizon
And you hold on to me so tight
As we feared the end of the evening
I didn't want you to leave my sight

But like all dreams this story has to end
As I tear myself away from your eyes
I realize you can lose me even in a picture
Only for you my broken heart cries.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Awh. A well thought out poem, full of heart and oozing several raw emotions. The flow was bit rocky, but overall nice. Good imagery and word usage, and a sweet story told.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Awww..happy yet sad..it seems thats how some relationships are..i liked the metaphors you used and the flow was great..it definitely painted a pretty picture of a happy relationship that had to end eventually though we wish the good ones could last forever. Keep up the good work..one thing i want to point out though is in the fourth stanza you have the word "away" when i think it should be "a way" figured id let you know. anyways 5/5!

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