Awww..happy yet sad..it seems thats how some relationships are..i liked the metaphors you used and the flow was great..it definitely painted a pretty picture of a happy relationship that had to end eventually though we wish the good ones could last forever. Keep up the good work..one thing i want to point out though is in the fourth stanza you have the word "away" when i think it should be "a way" figured id let you know. anyways 5/5!

Awh. A well thought out poem, full of heart and oozing several raw emotions. The flow was bit rocky, but overall nice. Good imagery and word usage, and a sweet story told.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N