by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Sep 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Read this through, see what you make of it, then read the description of what it was really saying at the bottom. I hope you enjoy it. ^^ |
This is beautiful!! Amazing imagery, word choice and use of repetition! You have great talent!! |
by amber
This is great. I love it. You have such a way with imagery and words it's unbelievable. I wish i had your talent. I'm going to read more and leave more comments. Maybe your stuff will help inspire me. |
5/5 :] |
First things first, the title of this poem is memorable and creative. Makes the reader interesting and curious and is... well... great. |
by Teria
Wow. I kind of thought that's what it meant, but I didn't. Lol. I figured it had to do with someone/something falling in love, but a few things were just like. gah. I wasn't sure anymore. |