Wowieee. That kind of hurt my ego a little bit as a fellow writer M`Dear. :O Every line in this just blew me away. I noticed you had a new poem earlier, then when I seen your screen name on MSN I thought it mightbe in this, and it was..Ironically, it is the line that stood out to me the most in the poem as well. LOVELOVELOVE this. Amazing.

5.5
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That was a very beautiful poem! I like the storyline a lot! I'm really sorry you didn't get a chance to post it, but I had already delayed the results by almost 2 days or so.
I'll be holding another one soon, I think. So maybe you can join that one ^_^
Wonderful writing! Didn't expect less from you ^_^
5/5

5/5 this poem is long and the lines were good. im gonna add this poem to my favorites hope you dont mind

You told me about this idea.. a longggggggggggggggg time ago. Do you remember? xD
Back when we dated. I like how it turned out.
A lot.

Ok. i got the true meaning now, i never really caught on until i read the meaning of this poem, it was great, the way you portrayed the idea was just unexplainable. i loved how you brought the idea in to the context and made it sound so wonderful, 5/5

The metaphor you used in this was frikken amazing.
And I have to admit, I didn't really quite get it until I read your sidenote.
However, now that I DO fully understand it, all I have to say is...wow.

You did a beautiful job with this creation.
I particularly liked the repetition, I thought it worked well.
Alot of times repetition can kill the poem, but you managed to pull it of so elegantly.

Again, the imagery was beautifully painted.
It created very vivid pictures in my mind so that it was almost like I could see and hear everything that was happening.

This my dear, is certainly one of your best.

Wow, I loved this poem. The flow and the structure was outstanding, and your choice of wording was great. This was a great write from a great poet, keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe

Ok, i think that this was a hell of a poem to read. Not that it was bad it was the length lol. I absolutly loved how you set a scene and built a story around it. amazing xxx alex xxx

I really liked this poem.

I see you use your butterfly as a main symbol, good work nicely penned

your servant:
atticus

Wow. I kind of thought that's what it meant, but I didn't. Lol. I figured it had to do with someone/something falling in love, but a few things were just like. gah. I wasn't sure anymore.

But, once you explained it understood it completely.
And, fell more deeply in love with it. (:
Once again, the long lines work flawlessly together. (:

You have talent, my darling.

First things first, the title of this poem is memorable and creative. Makes the reader interesting and curious and is... well... great.

Next, the actual poem. It was pretty but I was admittedly a bit confused. I didn't quite know exactly what or who was being described. It still had great imagery (of course) and a good story line, but a bit confused.

And, of course, the description. It cleared everything up and made me like the poem even more. It was definitely a good decision to at that on...

A great piece of writing.... I love both the description and the hidden meaning... Amazing.

5/5 :]
Really Nice.
Liked This Line A Lot:

When your eyes dance with your intensity

This is great. I love it. You have such a way with imagery and words it's unbelievable. I wish i had your talent. I'm going to read more and leave more comments. Maybe your stuff will help inspire me.
thanks :)
~*~Amber~*~

This is beautiful!! Amazing imagery, word choice and use of repetition! You have great talent!!