by turtle Sep 20, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Rummaging through forgotten boxes, |
by DeathlyAmore
I saw your poem as beautiful. It was written very well and your poem was filled with metaphors which is always a plus for me. very refreshing. |
by Lisa
This was absolutely beautiful. It was very well written and drug me into it. It actually made me picture myself as that girl. Wonderful job. Keep it up!!!!! 5/5 |
by katie
I love this poem |
Hey that was great! It was different and the words you used were very powerful. I was really pulled into that poem... words to critique there arent really any, the flow and emotion was amazing! Keep up the amazing work! |
by Tahniya
Wow this poem is so cool. the words flow really well and it has alot of feeling in it! |