Wow!! this poem is soo awesome! i love the creativity behind it. good job!

This poem was very interesting and very well written, the imagery was fantastic. You have great potential as a writer keep up the great work 5/5

Penetrate haha
you can have a latasian baby if you want:)
Now its time for the serious face.
this was a really dark and deep poem aye. When you get up to read whatever poems you read in English people are going to be blown away by your passion and just be in awe of your wisdom with words. I also Emphasise on the passion part and relate it back with a big arrow to the penetrate part LOL!

LOVE YOU

A great poem that was creative and interesting. definitely a 5/5