Last Fear

by *Charisma*   Sep 21, 2007


Last Fear
At one time my worst fear
Was seeing the woman you chose over me.
I dreaded what I was compared to.
Was she beautiful?
What was her personality like?
Did she love you like I did?
But in such a short time...
I had to face those fears, for I met her.
And she was beautiful,
(though I'd love to deny it)
And she was sweet,
And she loves you.
Now I'm not sure what fears I have left to face.
Maybe just the one left inside my soul
The one fear I still haven't faced
Because it requires complete surrender
A giving up, giving in....
Acknowledging the situation and allowing it to be.
Yes, I guess the only fear I have now
Is letting go.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    True, so true. Sometimes our worst enemies are ourselves dear. But that will help to move on...letting go, although the most difficult aspect of this process I'm sure. Still thought, hun, the poem was excellent and some of my fav in your work come from free form. Great job and congrats girl on winning! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    REALIST.
    We're learning right now abuot the different types/style of writing. ;; Realist, Romanticism.. So on. Yeah?
    Lmfao, everytime I read one of your poems I think realist. You don't scratch the surface, you don't fool around.. you just tell it how it is. Boom, Bam. Yeah. Haha.

    I love it, it's amazing.
    (: Keep it uP!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this. It was different, and in some senses a little awkward to read..but once I read over it a few times, I can`t say anything bad about it really.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by kimberly

    :) from your heart and soul... amazing!

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