I loved this, the whole symbolism of the butterfly was perfect for this piece, it really pulled me into it and kept me reading. Great work, as always.

5.5
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A very lovely poem, love all your poem

Wow.
I really wonder if they can, or if that butterfly is stuck like that forever.
Anywho back to the poem. LOL.
I loved it, dear. It was a bit emotionless, BUT it wasn't at the same time. It was like it was only skin deep, but you could see all the way through.
Which is what made me love it so much.

Amazing job, and great idea with it. (:
Keep it up honey.

I absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED this poem!!! It was so descriptive and fantastic!!! You are such a talented writer. You did a great job with this and the analogy was fantastic. Once again I can't say enough. Just keep it up girl! :)
~Midnight Sun

That was beautiful and I loved the word choice. 5/5