Want you here

by Kaila   Sep 21, 2007


It's so hard to get you to look my way,
getting tounge tied on what words to say,
Do you even notice me standing there?
I hope in my mind, one day you'll care.

I hate that feeling i get inside,
When you smile at her then walk on by,
I feel so invisible standing here,
you don't know how bad i want you near.

I'm tired of crying myself to sleep at night,
But being with you just seems so right,
lying there thinking of what should be,
wishing you'd lye there with me.

Getting frustrated that you don't care,
Hopeing and wishing you want me there,
I pray to God that you will see,
How much you truly mean to me.

*Dedicated to Preston**

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    This poem is reminding me my situation with a guy. I know how it feels to be invisable to a guy. good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This reminds me of the song Tear Drops On My Guitar. I don't know why the story just seems similar. Another amazing write. The words you chose were great and every line was clear. What more can I say you have so much talent

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved it! I could relate with every emotion and the flow was amazing. Nothing seemed forced and I was hooked from beginning to end. Beautifully done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aw, this is such a beautiful poem. I loved the emotion coming out of this. The flow fit just perfect with the poem. Great job! 5/5

    *Cindy*

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem brought tears to my eyes. i can relate to this poem alot. it hurts knowin u know how things should b but yet it never will happen. this poem tells the story of love and its so true. keep it up

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