Aww. thats sucks, not being able to have someone you want. mmm.

i really like this poem. its sweet. and its something i would cherish if i was in your shoes.

This is a nicely penned piece. Personal, decent fluidity, good story told. There are a few grammatical errors, such as:

"The curls cascade over me face"
(me needs to be my)

"Was over all to fast"
(to needs to be too)

"And realizing your where I feel at home"
(your needs to be you're)

[: Well sussed out, overall a good read.
Keep it up!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

This one you have is really cute as well