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by stev Sep 21, 2007 category : Fun, humor / for kids
Mummy Ive got to go, the wait is to intense, i start school today, he yells as he jumps the fence, going to make new friends, going to play in the sand, waiting for his name to be called, he could barely stand. in class he stood up front, hi my name is kirt i brought my tonka truck, I'm gonna push it in the dirt, when he heard the bell ring, it gave a tear to his eye, as it was the days end, didn't want to say good bye, and mum thought it was going to be hard, to send him to a fresh place, little did she know, that just wasnt the case....
by Spirit
And mum thought it was going to be hard, to send him to a new school, little did she know, he wasn't to be no fool.... you used double negatives here i don't know if you wanted it that way but it sound funny also you might want to add " " so that we know the boy is talking as for the section i really don't know where to put it but it might fit better under life poems even though it was a bit funny 4