And mum thought it was going to be hard,
to send him to a new school,
little did she know,
he wasn't to be no fool....

you used double negatives here i don't know if you wanted it that way but it sound funny

also you might want to add " "
so that we know the boy is talking

as for the section i really don't know where to put it but it might fit better under life poems even though it was a bit funny
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